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This is an inspiring short article about life -- about doing things that impact others and how to respond to either praise or blame, and learn from mistakes. It gives a sensible message for the reader to put into practice.

My suggestions would be:
1. Watch out for spacing between words and punctuation makrs.
2. Stick to first person 'we' 'us', or second person, 'you', especially within the same sentence.
3. There's a word left out here: no need to them seriously
4. I also think this article could be longer -- maybe some examples would help you make your point more effectively.

Thanks for sharing this!


My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .