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This is an intriguing subject - an artist, interpreting the wrinkles on different faces. I see you've just started it -- are you working on it and making it a longer piece? It definitely has a lot of potential.

I'm going to give my suggestion based on what you've already written so far. You say 'every face' is an epic, and then go on to talk about only old faces with wrinkles. I hope you'll widen the scope of this piece to cover faces right from those of babies, and if you would like to stay with the theme of 'wrinkles', then the wrinkles that come with smiling, worrying, and so on through the years, maybe ...

Also -- (am I being too greedy?) maybe this piece could have some illustrations of the faces ... ?

Thanks for sharing this!

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- Sonali






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