Hallo!
This came up in the 'random review' and it gave me a warm, fuzzy feeling to start the day. Thank you!

I love the subject you have chosen to write about -- 'hugs'. I think you have covered a lot, and could write lots more if you choose to lengthen this piece.

My suggestions would be for paragraphing and spacing. Maybe you'd like to use some WritingML, too, like font and size.

The word 'too' when it means 'also' is spelled with a double 'o'.
'Someone' 'Whatever' and 'Everything' might look better as one word each, instead of two.

I notice that you've classified this as 'poetry', but it currently is formatted like prose. Maybe you'd like to try a poem format.

Thank you for the smiles!

Write On!
- Sonali


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