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Greetings, hullabaloo22! I discovered this lovely piece of writing on the Newsfeed! *Smile*


*Quill* First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.


What I Liked

         *Bullet* This touching piece moved me right from the beginning, all the way to the last line.

         *Bullet* The change in font color added to the emotion of this impressive poem.

         *Bullet* The raw admission of your words, is likely a common thread shared by all of us. This struck me most, I believe.


Suggestions to Consider

         *Bullet* Line 7: and blossom strewn I think you meant blossoms.


Final Thoughts

         This is so beautifully written! It's like a confession, an admission, a raw truth... to what most of us connect with. I love this!!! And it will stay with me for quite some time. *Heart*


Have a great day and...*Quill*
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