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 As the Sun Sets Open in new Window. [E]
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"As the Sun Sets" is a very nice little short poem where the poet clearly indicates what is his state of mind As the sunsets. Though the poet uses the minimum number of words, it does not hamper at all to express the entire things. This is the prime beauty of this short poem. The poem is wonderfully written by the poet opbroekc.
The poet is eagerly waiting for the sunset but he searching for something with a hope to regain his little sparkling star is lost in the thieving night. Unfortunately, he finds the little sparkling star in the sky. So, he cries.
This poem is written with the full of poetic artistry which gives awesome readability.
Hope, many wonderful poems will be enriched us in the future, too.

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