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 when I was young Open in new Window. [E]
My first semi poem
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"when I was young" is the very nicely written first semi poem which is written by the author sadwaste. This poetic effort is very emotional indeed, there is no doubt about it. When the poet was young, she nd her nearest ones were hoped that she would do something extra-ordinary but she was not able to fulfil those dreams by defeating the preset fate. But the poet tried very hard and grew up to be a crazy, tormented teen who has the weight of the world on her shoulders. She becomes this pattern of a warrior. So, a biographical essence is present here ll through her semi-poetry. She is focusing on the darker sides of her life.
Undoubtedly, the writing effort of the poet is very matured indeed. Keep writing.

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