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 walking a line Open in new Window. [E]
finding a way to balance
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"walking a line" is another nicely written poetry by our reputed poet Rhyssa which is written from self-experiences. Undoubtedly, it is very difficult to maintain the proper balance between reality and our passion. We need to maintain the balance properly for at least our existence otherwise we shall never be anywhere.
We can not win the game of life, we do not have the ability to win. Even we do not want to lose the game of life because a defeat means the end of every hope in life which is also very much intolerable indeed. So, we are spinning between win and defeat. This is our fate.
A frustrating message is here by the poet. But, a ray of hope is also present here. So, the takes necessary cautions to deny the defeat in any form. The experiences of the poet help a lot.
Please, do not frustrate. Try to remain positive minded. At least, do not adopt negative mind-setting.
This is a very nicely written poetry. Keep this performance. Hope, many poetry like this will come soon.

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