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 To Meet the Reaper Early Open in new Window. [E]
Death is not always the end, sometimes it's a brand new beginning
by S.J - Not Around Much Author Icon
Review by Angus Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Ahoy, Jamie, and happy belated 3rd ‘birthday’ on here!
A glimpse into the afterlife, eh?
Near death experiences have opened up many eyes to make people live every day like it’s their last, and you did a good job of showing that with this piece. Most folks (myself included, sadly) take life for granted, not realizing that they could be killed in a car crash just by going to the store for a loaf of bread!
Hell, I should have died several times already; been shot at 3 times, been in two rollover car accidents, and fell out of my Jeep and wound up in a coma for 2 days with a blood clot on my brain. The doctors said if I would have hit my head on the pavement a mere ½ inch to either side, it would have killed me instantly.
Sorry, I digress.
I don’t know if this is a personal experience of yours or not, but regardless, you’ve given a good description of what it might be like to be on the cusp of death. A lot of people speak of seeing that ‘white light’, but I personally think everybody’s version of going into that ‘great beyond’ is different. That’s not to say I believe in an afterlife, nor does it mean that I don’t.
I do believe in something though, and whatever that ‘something’ is, I guess I’ll just have to wait to find out! *Bigsmile*
Great spelling and telling, but I did spot a few tiny niggles (sorry to be so picky, but I’m a grammar Nazi! *Laugh*):
‘Those are answers I shall not receive(,) however as the man’
‘Or at least, it would of been.’ (have)
‘...planning on surprisingly my girlfriend’
‘...next time, Mr Smith(.)"
‘...since I lasted set eyes upon her(.) In the distance’
‘...higher the city raised?’ (rose)
Otherwise, nice job!
Kee ponw ritin gon, Jamie! Have a really gnarly day, and may you have many more wonderful ‘birthdays’ on WdC!

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