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Bon jour, Lorraine!
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This is a classic example of the ‘out of the frying pan, into the fire’ syndrome, and even as short as it is, it’s still pretty good.
The idea of being trapped inside that nuclear reactor was a good enough plot idea by itself, but then to have them come ‘save’ you and make you science project put this over the top.
Personally, I think you could/should expand on this; keep writing it in the first person and talk about your daily experiences inside the reactor, at least for awhile until they come and ‘save’ you, anyway. It might not seem like there’s too many directions you can go with it, but look what Richard Matheson did with his I Am Legend!
‘I seemed to emit radiation, so I couldn’t leave here and expose others.’ (How considerate of you! *Laugh* Just kidding!)
Kee ponw ritin gon, Shaye! PLEASE! Thanks for sharing this, and have a really gnarly weekend!

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