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 Bitter Brews Open in new Window. [E]
Today Seems a wee bit Strange
by QueenNormaJean AKA Marilyn M. Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Bon jour, Normajean!
I’m reviewing this as a "The WDC Angel Army" Open in new Window. Angel and to thank you for all the reviews you do on this site!
I love mysterious (and somewhat foreboding) stories like this, and you did a great job coming up with this unique idea!
Meg and Penny disappearing after drinking those strange 'bitter brews' was a cool concept, and I love that ambiguous ending. You could have worked another 58 words into it, but I like it just the way it is. You stopped it right where it should have stopped!
Where did Meg and Penny go after the shop was closed? And why didn't the barista see them when he was closing the shop? 'Only the shadow knows...' *Smirk2*
Kee ponw ritin gon, my friend! This might not have won the contest, but it was a winner in my eyes!

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