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Dream Stuff Open in new Window. [E]
Was it all a Dream?
by QueenNormaJean AKA Marilyn M. Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Guten tag, Normajean!
I'm reviewing this as a "The WDC Angel Army" Open in new Window. Angel and to thank you for all the reviews you do on this site!
This is neat! It's a dream inside a dream about dreams...I think. Anyway, I know what it was about, and you did a great job of telling it!
The idea of these little creatures taking out all of your dreams and organizing them into piles was really original, and then having them going against the Big Boss's orders and leaving the bad dreams out was a nice touch.
And then to wake up and remember only a part of it, only to have that go 'poof!' (as so many of our dreams do!) was an excellent way to end it!
Well done, my friend!
One tiny niggle (I think--I do a lot of thinking! *Laugh*):
'Then there is a whole other other pile...' (are you sure you want that extra one in there?)
Kee ponw ritin gon, Normajean! 'Twas a pleasure to read, and have a fantastic evening/tomorrow!

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