I also want you to know that I realize for some, poetry is a very personal experience, and some criticism can be taken personally.
Keep in mind that I'm merely basing my review off my own personal interpretation of your work and don't feel obligated to use any suggestions that may lie within. I consider myself a forever student and sometimes simply enjoy exploring new poetic devices I have learned when I notice them.
Hopefully, you'll find this review helpful and encouraging!
Overall Impressions:
This poem rings true surrounding the discussion of global warming. It also resonates with the current political climate... "fake news" and all.
You stayed true to the form and its requirements.
Great job expanding this into two stanzas. You could've stuck with one as it stands alone, but expanding it improved upon the argument and was well done.
Additional Comments:
Good Job on this challenge! I wish you luck in both "Invalid Item" and in all your endeavors for "I Write in 2019" !
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