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Review #4498335
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Snow's Writing for 2019, 2020, & Beyond Open in new Window. [13+]
This book holds the items for the contest I enter in 2019, 2020, and beyond.
by Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon
         Review for entry/chapter: "Week 10: Ya Du - Global WarmingOpen in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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*Idea* Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon! I'm reviewing Week 10: Ya Du - Global Warming from Snow's Writing for 2019, 2020, & Beyond Open in new Window. today from "WdC SuperPower Reviewers GroupOpen in new Window. for "I Write in 2019Open in new Window.!

I also want you to know that I realize for some, poetry is a very personal experience, and some criticism can be taken personally.

Keep in mind that I'm merely basing my review off my own personal interpretation of your work and don't feel obligated to use any suggestions that may lie within. I consider myself a forever student and sometimes simply enjoy exploring new poetic devices I have learned when I notice them.

Hopefully, you'll find this review helpful and encouraging!


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This poem rings true surrounding the discussion of global warming. It also resonates with the current political climate... "fake news" and all. *Laugh*

You stayed true to the form and its requirements.

Great job expanding this into two stanzas. You could've stuck with one as it stands alone, but expanding it improved upon the argument and was well done.

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Good Job on this challenge! I wish you luck in both "Invalid ItemOpen in new Window. and in all your endeavors for "I Write in 2019Open in new Window.!

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