Reviewing this as a fellow participant in "I Write in 2019"  [E]

First impression: The extensive use of alliteration is what caught my eye here.

Suggestions: Again, I don't really have any. While the alliteration was a bit distracting at first, on re-reading, it doesn't detract from the meaning of the poem as I understand it, but adds a dream-like repetition to the flow.

Overall: Blurs the line between reality and fantasy. To me, the poem seems to be about seeing what you want to see in someone, rather than what they really are. But it's a good bet I'm missing something. Enjoyable read - keep it up!

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