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Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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It's been a pleasure to review your story "Invalid Item" Open in new Window. on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" Open in new Window.

*BurstP* FIRST IMPRESSION: This is a good story. Wonderfully told with third person. I especially liked the way you tell your story.

*BurstP* THE STORY: . I like the suspense of the story. You woven beautifully the situations which kept me reading.

*BurstP* DIALOGUES: Though there is no dialogue but it floated normally between the characters. I could imagine the scenes where she is.

*BurstP* CHARACTERS: All the characters are well developed. I especially liked the main character. You crafted her so beautifully.

*BurstP* SUGGESTION: I didn't any mistake.

*BurstP* FINAL THOUGHT: you are a good storyteller. I appreciate the way you are telling this story.

I can’t wait to read another story from you. I enjoyed it reading.

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