It's been a pleasure to review your Swannet poem "Invalid Item"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" . This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

This is very thoughtful poem. The words are empowering, so true and easy to read that keeps me reading your poem to the end. It has good rhythm and flowed beautifully with your crafted words. I like the repeated line “Let's fly away across the clear blue sky,
so we can continue with spirits high..

I like the thoughts evokes in this poem.

Thank you for sharing the link and the excellent poetry’s you have written here.

Mina


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