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Zimbabwe Rain Open in new Window. [E]
A memory of the rains in Africa. Third place winner in Shadows and Light Poetry Contest.
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Review of Zimbabwe Rain  Open in new Window.
Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
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It's been a pleasure to review your story "Zimbabwe Rain" Open in new Window. on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" Open in new Window.

This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.

You have wrote a charming poem of Zimbabwe Rain with sourcing heat and clouds of indigo and blue that swallowing the hills and creeping up the valley. Make the whole earth dancing with their melodies. You paints a beautiful picture of a rainy day.

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