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Guten tag, Tobias, and happy belated 5th 'birthday' on here!
One of my favorite things to read are re-invented Brothers Grimm Faery Tales (yep, Disney didn't create it!), so to see you re-writing Cinderella as a newspaper article was real treat!
This feels more like a modern day version of that story, but that's fine. You still a great job of portraying her as a bullied little girl who in real life was actually being stalked by that lecherous Prince Charming weirdo!
Sadly, I can totally understand why she chose to end her life and take that Royal Creep and her cruel step-family with her!
And like you, I also hope she has at long last found the happiness she so truly deserves! *Rolling*
I love it!
Suggestions and comments:
'Leroy remarriaged' (remarried?)
'due to sign(s) of serious neglect'
"claimed to be able to talk to rodents and birds." *Laugh*
Most excellent, my friend!
Kee ponw ritin gon, Tobber! Thanks for the laughs, have a wonderful day, and may you have many more wonderful 'birthdays' on WdC!

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