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The Cage Open in new Window. [ASR]
What's more dangerous than a trapped barbarian?
by Robert Waltz Author Icon
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Ahoy, Robert!
Oh, the humanity! Oh, the horror! Oh, the hilarity!
This is great, Robert! You did a mighty fine build-up to that surprise/twisted ending, and like some of your other reviewers, I agree that this would be a great setting to a much longer fantasy story. But seeing as you only wrote it for the punch line, that's understandable.
What really stood out was your descriptions in this. That part about how the warrior came to possess that blade was very well done, and the whole piece (especially the part about the cage) reminded me of the original Planet of the Apes with Charlton Heston!
'Enchanted prison-on-wheels'? *ThumbsUpL*
Great spelling and telling, and I can see why it has that ribbon on it!
Kee ponw ritin gon, my friend! It was a pleasure to read, and have a fantabulous day!

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