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 |  | No Appointment Necessary  [18+] Lou Ryan's new case: Dames, Gams, Goons, Goners & Bribes  |
| (5.0)| Hi Webbie! I just read a chapter of Lou Ryan's new case told in first person views. It's been a pleasure to review your story "No Appointment Necessary" on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" . This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. TITLE:The title fits this story. FIRST IMPRESSION: This is good story. great characters, and an interesting plot-line. I like the suspense of the story.  THE STORY: Lou Ryan's was a private detective. He works in Lou Ryan detective agency. Lou Ryan's prepared himself to stand up for justice. In this story you paints him beautifully.  SETTING:In a modern time. CHARACTERS:All the characters well developed. I like the character Lou Ryan's. DIALOG: Dialogue floated normally between the characters . OVERALL IMPRESSION: Wonderful story. I enjoyed it reading.** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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You responded to this review 07/07/2019 @ 9:13pm EDT