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 Greetings, amy-Finally writing a novel.  ! I am reviewing this because I am part of "I Write in 2019"  ,  First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.My First Impression Clearly, you enjoy the hustle! It sounds like your business is growing, too, which is awesome. I like how you don't have unrealistic expectations, and yet you still strive to expand. I wish you much success!Punctuation/Grammar/Typos  Other than a few commas I omitted in my suggestions below, everything looke great!Other Suggestions  Paragraph 4 - this is not giving me the financial freedom and stability that I want. I'm wondering if you might consider something similar to... this is not giving me the financial freedom and stability I yearn for. or this is not giving me the financial freedom and stability I require. Paragraph 5 - I have not gotten clients for my membership site, yet, but all is not lost.Perhaps consider replacing not gotten. Here are a few possibilities... I haven't any interested clients for my membership site yet, but all is not lost. or Though I haven't recieved any clients for my membership site so far, all is not lost. Paragraph 6 - Even when I am set up with a streamlined strategy I am sure there will beHere are a few options to avoid beginning a sentence with Even... Once I am set up with a streamlined strategy, I am sure there will be or As soon as I am set up with a streamlined strategy I am sure there will be Thoughts/Emotions  This is exciting, Amy! I wish you the best of luck with your endevors!  My favorite part...It keeps my creative muscles flexed to come up with eye catching, creative posts on Facebook, LinkedIn and Twitter. I enjoy the hustle. I love how you worded this. Sounds like you are on the right path! Nicely written! I hope my suggestions were helpful.  Have a great day and  K e e p on W r i t i n g ! ~Cubby ")   My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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