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Review #4491026
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         Review for entry/chapter: "Clothespins Conversing..." Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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         *Penguin* Greetings, ruwth Author Icon! I am reviewing this because I am part of "I Write in 2019" Open in new Window., *Smile*

         First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. *Smile* Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

Title
         Clothespins Conversing... I have a close relationship with clothespins *Laugh* so I was attracted to this title right away. I never thought about the clothespins conversing and found this personification very intriguing! I will never take my clothespins for granted again! *Laugh* And I'll be sure not to mix my camping clothespins with the clothesline pins, or I might be inviting trouble! *Wink*

My First Impression
         I do not have a dryer, so I use lots of clothespins! I have every color and design, plastic and wood. And those springs can be annoying. Yes, I also have camping clothespins. *Bigsmile* I totally emerged myself in this little piece and thoroughly enjoyed it.

Punctuation/Grammar/Typos
         *Asteriskb* I found no typos nor any other issues. *Smile*

Other Suggestions
         *Asteriskv* None at all. A fun piece!

Thoughts/Emotions
         *Asterisko* I am wondering what my clothespins might be conversing about! *Laugh* Even more so, I wonder what they might see at night while the rest of us sleep. You've inspired me to perhaps write my own clothespin story... perhaps a children's story... or maybe even, horror! *Shock2*

         *Starb* My favorite part (referring to the camping vs clotheline:)
         "I was really glad to be able to get out and see the world. And just think, if you were on a clothesline, you might be hanging there in bad weather or stuck in a bag waiting to be used."
Love, love, love this! *Heartb*

*Penguin* Nicely written! I hope you do well in the contest. *Smile* *Penguin*

*Fisho* Have a great day and *Fishb*
K e e p on W r i t i n g !
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