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Hi, Jacky.
This is good. Considering the rapid technological advances we’ve gone through in the last 25 years or so, it’s no wonder the generation gap has grown as large as it is. You did a great job of showing that here, and your examples of using the camera and phone were perfect.
And the ending about Gramps quitting smoking was great.
My favorite part was the clock example. Oddly enough, Jimmy Kimmel just had a piece on his show asking college students on the street if they could tell the time on a regular clock—the round ones with the big hand and the little one—and 4 out of 10 them couldn’t do it!
Sad.
Anyway, great spelling and grammar, and nice use of the prompt words.
Kee ponw ritin gon, Jacky! ‘Twas a pleasure to read, and have a wonderful day!

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