My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

Theme/Subject Matter: This is a wonderful poem about Finding Gold!!!

Originality/Creativity: Your rhythm emphasizes the poem's emotions greatly.

Emotion/Impact: The main emotional impact is in the last stanza. This stanza reveals that you are "praying to be rescued - with your last breath".

My Favorite Part: The last stanza is my favorite because you are waiting for death and also praying for rescue with your last breath.

My Suggestions: I encountered no distractions. I found no technical problems.

Summary: This poem does a good job of having rhythm and telling a great story in your poem.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle



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