My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

"My Light" is a great poem you wrote. I was not sure if I would understand it since there was no rhyming with it. But because you put "You are my light" at the end of each stanza it made more sense not to rhyme this poem.

Did the time, place and other setting characteristics work together?: Yes, everything worked together.

Plot Interest: Your plot did interest me very well, the character was believable, and your dialog flowed naturally.

My Favorite Part: The last stanza is my favorite.

Was the writing memorable? Yes, your poem is memorable.

My Suggestions: I encountered no distractions. I found no technical problems.

you have a great poem here. I really enjoyed it.

Keep Writing!!!

Many Blessings, Sharmelle



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