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Review #4470793
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A Piece Of My Heart Open in new Window. [18+]
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         Review for entry/chapter: "Something about Public Speaking ... and other things tooOpen in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Wow, thank you so much for sharing all this! You put a lot of work and thought into your answer which I appreciate. I can relate to this so much- more than you know. I wasn't big or anything but that doesn't matter because my feeling were the exact same. I was self-conscious, felt different, had anxiety, didn't fit in-- the whole deal. So, whether or not the story is the same, it's the same, really. I couldn't do public speaking either!

Grammar and Spelling: I didn't notice any mistakes. I didn't pick apart your sentences either. But, in natural reading, I found no glaring issues.

Content: You put a lot of thought and heart into your answer. You opened up which was great and helps the others in the group to connect.

Appearance: I love how the prompt up top was in red and done up yet the rest was just in a nice font. It didn't make it overbearing which I have a tendency to do.

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