Wow what a place to stop, well done you have your readers wanting more. I enjoyed reading your romantic story, and the susspence keeps my interest and look for more the item kept me reading all the way to the end.
The item is displayed and structured in an easy to read forma t and it's not too long a passage or to small just
right. The imagery and the storyline blend well together and is a joy too read.

I found no errors in spelling or grammar but please recheck as I'm no expert in punctuation. I LOVE reading your items
they are so exciting and I'm really impressed how well your story has progressed. I'm not usually into romance but this one has stole my heart. I found no reason to suggest changes and you inspiration is well displayed with good expression and the words flow straight on to the page.
Overall impression A well written story with good imagery and inspiration which you give your readers a joy to read. MARY ANN MCPHEDRAN a member of Reviewing with River.

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