Hi and thank you for sharing your item with me, First impression on your item ws that I was interested in the your tittle. The tittle seemed to bring out the challenge in me, for your item is short but says volumes with in the storyline. The wind howling and we have been involved many times in the situation within the story. I life hoe you have written the description of your day, and you have penned it well.

Your structure is well descripted display, and font that is easy to read and understand, and you express your feelings of the story well.
Your item continued to keep my interest all the way to the end.

I found no grammar or spelling errors, but I strongly suggest you proof read, as my knowledge of punctuation is not great and I'm no expert.

I have no favourite lines and like all the story except to add that I like to huddle in a blanket on the sofa on days like your item describes. Overall member of impression. A well descripted story with good expression and storyline. Well done and keep writing. MARY ANN MCPEDRAN A member of reviewing with River.
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