Hi, and thank you for sharing your item with me. My first impression is you havefor your script chosen a goo topic and you have penned it well. I can agree with you that God gives us the choice of free will. to choose what we do with our life, and how we conduct it. Sometimes we go astray and make the wrong choices, but he also gives us the choice to turn our lives around and make ask for help . You have a great topic here for discussion. well done.
You have described your feelings well and structured your item with a good story, the imagery is great and fits the criteria of the storyline. I enjoyed reading your item and found no distractions of grammar or spelling, but I strongly advise you to reproof as I'm no expert when it comes to punctuation. The item needs no suggestion of changes, and I don't have any preference to a favourite line, I like all of your story, and I look forward to sharing more of them. Keep writing and sharing with all on WDC.
MARY ANN MCPHEDRAN A member of Reviewing with River.

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