A well written account of pain, pain isn't nice but your describe the suffering in a descripted format. Back pain is often ignored because you can't see it but it can be unbearable at times. The poem has been structured well and has an easy to read storyline. I have found no spelling or grammar errors and needs no reason to suggest any changes within the poem. I enjoyed reading your poem, and it kept my interest of the sad subject, all the way to the end of the item
Ihave no reason to circuses any special line the item is written perfect.
Your poem has given the view of a person suffering pain and you have done a great job, on the expression of the poem. the criteria of the topic fits the item. Overall impression. a well written descripted suffering of pain in a storyline of the subject pain. keep writing great inspiration and imagery. Well done.
Review written by a member of Reviewing with River, MARY ANN MCPHEDRAN
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