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Thank you for sharing your item with me. First I was greatly surprised at the ending although it was a great place to finish I thought you were going to go on a date and a romantic story would pop up. You did well in keeping your readers guessing. I enjoyed reading reading your story and you displayed it wel with easy to read format. Overall a great story. This review was written by Mary Ann MCPhedran a member of RIVERS REVIEWS.

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