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 Review #4445972 |
 | Just a Touch of Spring  [E] An early spring morning in Las Vegas  |
| (4.5)  Greetings, Prosperous Snow celebrating ! I found your item, "Just a Touch of Spring" in Random Reviews and decided to review it.  First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.My First Impression Such lovely words describing the departure of winter and the entrance of spring! I love the birth of spring, the scent of overturned earth, the green that replaces the brown. I live in Michigan so autumn is in full force and though the colors are brilliant, we are reminded that winter impatiently waits to take the stage. Punctuation/Grammar/Typos I found no punctuation or grammar issues. Suggestions/Thoughts Just something to think about, but you might consider not capitalizing the beginning of every line. Not everyone agrees to this, and there is no right or wrong here, only something to perhaps give thought to. Other than that, I have no other suggestions. It's a pleasing read and I thank you for sharing it! My favorite line...Ruffles the flight feathers of birds, I see this visual so clearly!  Nicely written! I hope my suggestion was helpful. Have a great day and... K e e p on W r i t i n g ! ~Cubby ")   My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 10/16/2018 @ 4:31pm EDT