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         *Pumpkin2* Greetings, Lou-Here By His Grace Author Icon! I found your item, "Invalid Item" Open in new Window., in Random Reviews and decided to review it. *Smile*

         First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. *Smile* Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

My First Impression
         *Cry* Oh my gosh, my eyes keep tearing up after reading this beautiful poem and tribute to a man frozen in the ice of a mountainside for sixty-six years. This is absolutely one of the best pieces I've ever read. I just cannot say enough about this piece. I don't give many 5 stars, but this one deserves it, and beyond. I will never forget this one.

Punctuation/Grammar/Typos
         I did not notice anything that needed correcting, however I was completely mezmerized with your words! *Bigsmile*

Suggestions/Thoughts
         I have no suggestions! What a talent you possess!

         *Starb* My favorite part...
                             Though his mother lived to be 102,
                             she never cut her hair,
This part was very emotional for me, as earlier in this piece you wrote that the 23 year old son told his mother not to cut her hair till he returned. *Cry* I wonder if that's why she lived so long... to see the return of her son. *Cry* Oh, goodness... This is so emotional for me!

*Starb* I think they should make a movie about this. I noticed you added a link to a book about this man, and also a blog which includes this poem. Thank you, thank you, thank you for sharing this piece with this community. I'll be thinking about this one for a long, long time.

*Thumbsup* Nicely written! *Smile*

Have a great day and...
*Pumpkin2*  K e e p on W r i t i n g ! *Pumpkin2*
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