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*Pumpkin2* Greetings, typingrhyme Author Icon! I found your item request, "Invalid Item" Open in new Window., in "The Shameless "Plug" Page" Open in new Window. forum and decided to review it. *Smile*

         First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. *Smile* Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

Flow
         This flows along pretty well. *Smile* You might want to read it aloud a few times or have someone read it to you. I always do this with my own poetry, just to be sure the meter flows throughout.

Punctuation/Grammar
         I noticed right away that you use very little punctuation, which is fine. If this had been written for children, however, you might consider adding punctuation. But I see your genre choices are Nature and Animals, so no worries. There is a freedom of writing poetry without punctuation and it is not distracting at all in this piece. *Smile*

         *Starb* My favorite stanza:
                             When I’m near a stream
                             And the moon shines bright
                             I’ll go for a swim
                             And eat fish that night

*Thumbsup* Nicely written! *Smile* And to answer your question at the end of your poem, I would not welcome a raccoon, lol. *Laugh* I've had too many problems with them in the garden and birdfeeders. *Facepalm* But I know people who absolutely adore raccoons. *Wink*

Have a great day and...
*Pumpkin2*  K e e p on W r i t i n g ! *Pumpkin2*
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