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Mary's Lucky Day Open in new Window. [E]
A cup of coffee, a Leprechaun, and a gold coin change things for Mary McAloon
by Whispering Ghost of C.St.Ann Author Icon
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Review by Rima... Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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Hello Carol,

I enjoyed reading your story.
I am no expert and what's following is my humble review which you may choose to ignore. *Angelic*


*WaterDrop* Why I chose this item:
This is a part of Angel Army June Challenge. The title seemed interesting and the tagline was intriguing.

*DropY* My favorites parts:
I liked the way the Leprechaun put the much needed positive energy into Mary. A few words of encouragement and the assurance that one is not alone in the battle of life works miracles.

*DropB* Characters:
Mary: A courageous young woman who faces life's difficulties head on. She seemed to be a single mother, a difficult task all by itself. She is not egoistic by practical. She also cares and think about others.

*DropO* StoryLine/Plot :
The story traveled on a straight line without much twists or turnings. It went into the main part right from the beginning. In very few words you are able to give us a glimpse of Mary's past. You told us why was Mary in a situation she is now.

*DropR* Action/Flow :
The flow was smooth. Most of the action took part in dialogue which is the main part of the story.

*DropV* Ending:
The story ended in a positive note. The Leprechaun didn't get her an easy solution but boasted her confidence. Its kind of a moral that whatever good you get, you need to earn it.

*DropG* Overall impression:
Overall it was a good read with some positive message.

*Drop* A few Typos:
None that I noticed.


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*Shield1* Rima...
Happy Writing *Quill* !!!
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