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 The Dragonriders (Octoprep Entry) Open in new Window. [13+]
Antagonist Entry for Octoprep
by JMondello Author Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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This is a nice story. It has elements of drama, fear, suspense and a mild climax. The men are here to conscript people. They are here to persecute them. There must be a way to escape. Niessa is a channel to talk to the men. She tries to coerce them. The commander on the other hand is out to persecute her. King Ivan is her grandfather. She ends up being conscripted herself. The story is enlightening as an eventuality of things. It is a way of looking at the end of things. She waits for twenty years and then she is conscripted too.

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