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Call Your Mother. Open in new Window. [13+]
Yup, call her. Or else! (First sentence prompt.) (Winner, Cramp.)
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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What does tHiNG think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I like the humor in your short story a lot. This guy thinks he knows what is going on, but the women in his life are way ahead of him. He is a fast mover, isn't he? I guess when it's right, it's right.

What does tHiNG applaud about while reading your item?

I like the easy banter between the boss and his assistant. I know he's not really her boss in her eyes, but it's very engaging that she is the one who knows best. The dialogue was witty and realistic and read naturally between the two.

I enjoyed your humorous take on the prompt! Well done!

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tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps a.k.a. HOOves

P.S. I am someone who loves to read and review. That is a pretty simple statement and it is true, in the spirit of Ernest Hemingway, who once said, "Write one true thing." *Heart*

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