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What brought tHiNg to glide in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* I am here on the recommendation of THANKFUL SONALI Magical Days! Author Icon. I am enjoying my reading and reviewing in your portfolio as I read your poem.

What does tHiNG think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea*I think that time is the ultimate teacher. You have definitely captured the elusive and powerful nature of time and how it makes us who we are.

What does tHiNG applaud about while reading your item?

This part stays with me:

"No matter how hard we try,

we are always behind.

And sometimes we cry,

Wondering where we lost our time."

This is especially true as we age. I look back and think what the heck was I so upset about that for? Well, it is all in perspective now. To be strong in the face of unrelenting time is the ultimate challenge.

Well done. The title fits perfectly, also. I enjoyed reading your work very much!

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tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps a.k.a. HOOves

P.S. I am someone who loves to read and review. That is a pretty simple statement and it is true, in the spirit of Ernest Hemingway, who once said, "Write one true thing." *Heart*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

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