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Hyundai Pie Open in new Window. [E]
I sing the praises of my car.
by Jatog the Green Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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What does tHiNG think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I like how your poem invites me, as a reader, along for the ride. It is a unique car that is a joy to just ride in and not be worrying about what you are trying to get to. I guess in that way, it is a joyous reminder of all that life can be.

Your couplets are engaging and the rhyme flows well.

What does tHiNG applaud about while reading your item?

This was my favorite section:

Oh, Hyundai Pie, I am auto-delighted,
I am very excited, to have you here with me.
Oh, Hyundai Pie, your black body does glisten,
and I give you a listen, when we zoom down the road.

It all reminded me of a car I loved and that was very reliable for me for a lot of years of long distance commuting through the mountains of Virginia. I felt like I was cruising along with you and Hyundai Pie.

Very nicely done!

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tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps a.k.a. HOOves

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