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Hi the Wordy Jay Author Icon ! I am Aqua and the following are only my personal opinions. Ultimately, you and only you can decide what works best for your item.

Hiya Jay once more and happy 1st WDC Anniversary from myself and "Anniversary Reviews" Open in new Window.! *Bigsmile* I never got the chance to read the entries of the fellow Martell warriors which were written for the weekly challenges and the prompts. I am glad I opened this entry, I didn't know it was in response to a weekly prompt but I know now. I didn't take part in this one because I joined in the end.

The prompt was very good, nostalgic and brought a lot of memories into mind, refreshing all those good, old days where we were all carefree, no worries of any sort, free to do whatever we wanted. They were amazing days but all of us grow someday and I did too. I really liked the prompt that it was open, not restricted to any particular memory. The way the prompt is given, any one can relate to the childhood fun and relate it to the piggy back rides.

Your take on the prompt was very good. I don't know if it is just fiction or it is realistic but nevertheless, it was very impressive, sweet and nice. When I had finished reading it, I was stunned for a while, a warm feeling in my heart. You have shared some beautiful memories of the childhood past and once again, how parents make sure we are never unhappy. *Heart*

My favourite part was when you mentioned how your Nana took you to different places to show her princess (meaning you) off! *Laugh* Other than that, I really admired the part where you had written how you thought of your father being tired but despite that, he used to carry you on his back. That was very, very heart warming and beautiful *Heart*.

Thank you for sharing your work with us!

Write On!
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