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No Chance to Say Goodbye Open in new Window. [18+]
My first attempt at free verse
by Thaddeus Buxton Winthrop Author Icon
Review by Past Member 'lynntarzan'
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Hi, Thaddeus Buxton Winthrop Author IconMail Icon *Smile* I'm here to do a Simply Positive Review of your writing, "No Chance to Say Goodbye" Open in new Window..
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*Flower1* Title: Perfect... prepares the reader for deep revelation.

*Flower2* Interpretation: This beautiful piece speaks of the great loss we experience in the death of a loved one, complicated by the unexpected suddenness, a great loss without a moment to prepare. A great sadness to bear.

*Flower6* What I liked most: "Nothing... is lonelier than goodbyes never said." This carries the entire poem, this is the heart of the poem and takes hold of the reader and does not let go.

*Flower3* A closer look: Despite all, the writer attempts to reconcile this stark reality. In the end, realization that the outcome does not change.

*Flower4* Thank you for allowing me this opportunity to review your piece. I enjoyed it! I Please continue to writer and share your beautiful gift with all of us here at Writing.com. God Bless *HeartT*


LynnPenCakes


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