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Hi panhandle, I am here on behalf of Simply Positive Group to review "A Terrible Thing". Thank you for this opportunity.



*ButtonV* Your Title: Very Good!

*ButtonV* What I liked best: This was a great little bit of fiction that allowed a good laugh to all that enter and read. You have painted a realistic scene only to pull the rug out! I left laughing as well, your goal met!

*ButtonV* Where I felt you could improve: I found no error or place to change. Short, sweet, quite humorous and witty.

*ButtonV* In closing, thank you again for this opportunity to experience your writing, your style and your wit. I will be back!
God Bless!

LynnPenCakes
About Her Father's Business
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