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The Lost Ones Open in new Window. [13+]
When war comes, their lives are changed...
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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What does tHiNG think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I thought about how sometimes we get caught up in something that is bigger than oneself. It is even bigger than a romance or a pairing of two like-minded souls. In the end of your fine poem, they are both lost, as the title indicates.

I thought this was very powerful and the rhyme just at the end of both stanza's is very effective and moving to me. It all was, really.

At the end of something there can be the choice or the inevitability of not seeing someone again. Either way, that is a profound challenge to live with such an outcome.

What does tHiNG applaud about while reading your item?

It was all wonderful, but this was the part that moved me most:

"She would hum him tunes
of her childhood.
He would sing back the tales of youth.
And despite the destruction they lived through
they knew what they longed for was truth."

Oh that truth, eh? Maybe they long for that which will hurt the most when it is seen, realized or recognized.

Brilliant poetry, start to finish. It could apply to most any doomed relationship in a number of instances.

Wonderful!

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