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 It Be Okay Open in new Window. [E]
Sally encounters a little bearded man.
by Jatog the Green Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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What does tHiNG think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I thought about how Sally could choose a couple of paths here. She could choose to be irritated or to put it aside and be friendly and treat it as an amusing anecdote for future reflection.

She chooses the latter, only to have things take a turn for the serious.

What does tHiNG applaud about while reading your item?

One never knows when someone being difficult conceals a much more serious problem than just cantankerousness.

This was my favorite part:

“Oh it’s fine, It Be Okay, that’s one way
to allay any tongue slips made today.”
Just then, It Be Okay began to sway,
asked for a chair and Sally said, “Okay.”

She chose kindness over disdain and was the better for it. She never saw him again, as the prompt indicates, but she was kind. That counts for something, I think, the effort to be kind when there is an easier and simpler choice.

Well done!


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