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 The Thing He did to Save Open in new Window. [ASR]
When you hear a whisper in the blackness of night, will you follow it?
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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What does tHiNG think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I like how the names of your characters are never revealed. It makes his gesture of sacrificing himself for her safety all the more noble. It goes without taking credit for things - he does it for her sake not for his.

The man, in this piece, gives up everything for the woman he loves, but yet feels as if he failed her. He could only do what he could do, after all and sacrificing one's life is a big thing to do for someone.

What does tHiNG applaud about while reading your item?

I like that the future unfolds for her in the sense that this person did all this for her, expecting nothing in return. Indeed he even apologizes for not doing more. She has her whole life in front of her to do something in his memory.

Very moving and poignant story. Well told!

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tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps a.k.a. HOOves

P.S. I am someone who loves to read and review. That is a pretty simple statement and it is true, in the spirit of Ernest Hemingway, who once said, "Write one true thing." *Heart*

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