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Lonely Planet Open in new Window. [E]
Loneliness in a world full of people.
by Don Two Author Icon
Review of Lonely Planet  Open in new Window.
Review by Past Member 'lynntarzan'
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Don Two *Smile* I'm here to do a Simply Positive Review of your writing, Lonely Planet.
Any suggestions made are only an opinion and meant to be a help.
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*Flower1* Title: Perfect!

*Flower2* Interpretation: This is a realistic glimpse of everyday life for people, some,a lonely existence. This strips away any façade. The reader is gently turned round and round, focusing on all walks of life, seeing life in motion, busy yes, but lonely. More than one reference to electronics, which in my opinion has ushered this "lifestyle" in.

*Flower6* What I liked most: "The Silent Crisis, reads the headline in a magazine; in a world so full of people, loneliness is seen." This strikes a strong cord, right to the heart.

*Flower3* A closer look: I really enjoyed readying your poem. It is interesting, engaging, compelling, and reads well, no errors noted.

*Flower4* Thank you for allowing me this opportunity to review your piece. I enjoyed it! I Please continue to writer and share your beautiful gift with all of us here at Writing.com. God Bless *HeartT*


LynnPenCakes


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