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 You Are All I Need Open in new Window. [E]
How God sees me through
by Rhoswen - Relentless Victory Author Icon
Review by Past Member 'lynntarzan'
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*SuitHeart* Hello Rhoswen-Irish White Rose *Smile* I am here on behalf of Simply Positive Review Group. What I offer is my opinion only as I am not a professional writer, I just love writing down thoughts and stories so please use it if you can, if not, feel free to toss it overboard! *BigSmile*


*SuitHeart* Impression: The writer paints a picture of their trust, praise, worship of and love for an almighty God; their unshakeable faith in their God; their profession of love and obedience in return. The reader is allowed within the "thoughts" of the writer and share in their belief if desired. This is inviting, warm and brimming with love. This poem inspires, encourages and reassures the reader, we will prevail, God is our unchanging tower we run to.

*SuitHeart* Loves and Likes: I loved "In my moment of sorrow, when all I can do is weep, surrounded by a battle I don't want, You are the comfort I run to." To me, this allows every reader to "own" this, for their own. If we have lived more than one day by faith, we've known battles and can identify.

*SuitHeart* I found no areas that distracted, caused bumps or pauses or took from the overall meaning and spirit of the poem.

*SuitHeart* In closing, thank you again for allowing me to review your piece and for giving me a glimpse into your world. May your pen never run dry... and please continue to share your work on the pages of WDC. Until the next review... be blessed always!


LynnPenCakes

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