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*SuitHeart* Hello Mordee2, I am here to review The Face at the Window as a member of the Simply Positive Group *BigSmile*


*SuitHeart* What your item says to me and the feelings created as I read... The title captures interest. The readers asks, "what will I discover within?" Your word choices and arrangement are engaging, easy to read, painting clearly, true possibilities of what may lie beyond "The Face at the Window".

*SuitHeart* In my humble opinion, your story is good, provokes thought and contemplation. There is a quiet encouragement, or nudging, for all to consider, there is always more than meets the eye to anyone within that window and simply to look with our hearts. There is a permeating sadness within your story. As I said, this is only my opinion, but is what your story spoke to me.

*SuitHeart* In closing, thank you again for allowing me to review your piece and for giving me a glimpse into your world. May your pen never run dry... and please continue to share your work on the pages of WDC. Until the next review... be blessed always!


LynnPenCakes


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