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Kaleidoscope Open in new Window. [E]
Autumn has arrived. (Form: Free Verse) A Shadows and Light Poetry Entry
by 🌖 HuntersMoon Author Icon
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Review by Past Member 'lynntarzan'
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*SuitHeart* Hello HuntersMoon *Smile* I am here on behalf of Simply Positive Review Group to review Kaleidoscope. I offer you only my opinion of what your creation meant to me. *BigSmile*


*SuitHeart* Impression: The writer engages the reader much like friends sharing a kaleidoscope to peer inside. It's mesmerizing, moving, engaging... The reader is focused on the imagery created by the words. The reader is part of the seasonal change and finds pleasure.

*SuitHeart* In my humble opinion, your piece was skillfully written. I find no areas that I would change.

*SuitHeart* I have enjoyed reading your beautiful poem which embodies the richness and beauty of autumn, one of my favorite seasons. One of my favorite parts "Once green-hued leaves are cloaked in summer remnants - reds and pinks, golds and yellows, rusts and browns". This so tied to the title of your poem, as you have placed in the readers control how quickly or slowly these changes take place much like one spinning the kaleidoscope in their hands. Thank you for this opportunity to read and review your poem. Write on!!


LynnPenCakes

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