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This is a nice story. It has gore in it. The barbecue is a fascinating evening activity. People do barbecues to have a good snack as well as spend some good time with themselves. A neighbor falling into a barbecue can be gross, but can be a possibility. A wild chance and a trip of the foot over the fence can make him become impaled. It is his bad luck. The author takes advantage of this and cooks him on the barbecue. The story shocks and amuses us. There is grossness in the story. If he feeds his dog, it may be less gross.

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