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This is a good story. A sci/fi plot always sets readers pulses racing. A spacecraft in trouble is a good idea. The story makes us think how a pilot who has lost control of his spacecraft comes to terms with it. The plot grips us and makes us think how far in the future it is set. A spacecraft landing on the ground perhaps on earth or another planet. It looks out for another craft for help. The imminent crash can make anyone panic. The pilot finds his ground and veers the spacecraft. A ship is headed towards him. The story could be more elaborate.

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